Frozen 2 Script Doctor 

Possibly my favorite so far, Thank you!!!!!.. also may i say #releasetheNicholsoncut..... or #makeandreleasetheNicholsoncut. Thanks again x

This is almost exactly how I felt about Frozen II. The only thing I felt differently about was Olaf, I thought he was really weird in this one.

It’s been a year but what if the fire spirit when Anna takes off the clothes and they bond gives this look of “you don’t understand...follow me” and he leads Anna through a cave where she finds her parents frozen in ice? It could allude back to the ice statue of her mother saving her father and might make things a bit too clear to Anna but this could also happen after Elsa goes missing or Elsa could refuse to believe it because she’s so set on her parents being dead and it’s a wound she doesn’t want to reopen? It might make the ominous bad thing more clear to the children audience while being a bone chilling twist for the adults. It makes it more clear just how terrible it is that Elsa is going down a really bad path (though this could also be a twist in Frozen 3). Anna is desperate to get Elsa to understand and feels completely betrayed that Elsa doesn’t seem willing to accept that her parents are alive. When they check the shipwreck earlier, there’s no mist explanation and Elsa assumes that the parents drowned further out to sea (or assumes the mist explanation) and Anna has a feeling that they could still be out there which is later confirmed by the fire spirit showing her. In Frozen 3, Anna who is now alone has to find a way to save their parents without Elsa’s ice powers (it’s magic ice so she can’t just use an ice pick or whatever) and Anna discovers that the younger girl Honeymaren practices natural magic using spells and natural resources which Anna learns and she gets a cool witch/spellcaster outfit which means new appreciation for her and new merchandise and she and Honeymaren bond. Eventually Anna convinces Elsa when her powers are just about to overtake her and make her full evil or villainess tries to get Elsa to hurt Anna because she knows Anna’s onto her and Elsa almost does then catches herself and uses her powers to defeat villainous OR Anna gets her parents out with nature magic and they all go to Elsa to stop her...one of those and Elsa goes back and Honeymaren takes over the group of people as their new ruler (assuming the former ruler is villainess) and Elsa and Honeymaren use the power of lesbianism to heal the broken bond between Arendelle and the other place.

Non white tribe? Girl they're in Norway what

I honestly hated elsa in both movies. Anna is the best character and deserve more recognition. Elsa shows nothing but fear and wants to do everything by herself and leaves anna all the time. Anna is the hero in both movies and is the true leader

There is actually now a book out that goes into the Agnarr/Iduna relationship and how the Northuldra were hated in Arendelle and Iduna kept her heritage secret until she and Agnarr were about to die.

i’m so mad that Jenny’s less than 10 minute rewrite of frozen 2 (and possible 3) was something genuinely so interesting and something i could imagine seeing and LOVING was better than the actual movie that was just thrown together with no direction and no plot until 2 weeks before the release date. Also sucks that frozen had a budget so big it could compare against the US army and Jenny is funded by her patreon and basically giving Disney her ideas for free to steal

The singing Elsa hears also sounds like the Dies Irae, a motif that composers usually use to signify death, so that could’ve been some cool musical foreshadowing that she was being tricked.

i only noticed the porg halfway through and then probably laughed too hard

Long ago the four elmemts lived in harmony

How is she so good at this

I wanna see ur frozen two so bad

Okay but I was genuinely invested in Jenny's version of frozen 2 and i had legit chills when she revealed she would end the movie on a cliffhanger where elsa is under an evil influence and anna is queen on a mission to get her sister back. And maybe the third movie could reveal that villanous wanted to attack arandelle all this time, she was using elsa to recruit all the spirits and then she commands the spirits to attack arandelle, elsa realizes that's not what she wants, so while anna is fighting a battle to buy the people of arandelle more time using her fire spirit lizard, elsa comes in to help her out and basically- fire and ice unite against wind, earth and villainous. I am still figuring out villainous' motivations but that could involve the grandfather/elsa's mom being the reason she lacks any real powers like the other spirits and maybe the big reveal could be elsa's powers come from villainous. I have a vague idea of the ending for the battle but i think I am going to shut up, change the character names and world build a little bit and make a fantasy franchise of my own on wattpad. All art is inspired so i think i'm fine from a legal standpoint. Good day.

why are your movie pitches always 10 times better than the original??

I love the porg

Dearest Jennifer, I hope all is well. it's been two weeks since your video about a fur covered trout. I honestly do not get the reference. I have been trying to sleep to no avail. I decided to listen to your content. It is heavily recommended to me by the algorithm, though I've already watched all of it a few times. I notice your idea of 'Villanous' seems to be a pretty clear female senator Palpatine. When you describe Villaness planting seeds of corruption in Elsa's ear (grose) I pretty much imagined Elsa and Palpatine walking around the jedi temple speaking in grim suggestive tones. [Could Qui Gon be Elsa's father?] On top of this, your plan to have Elsa become evil but then be redeemed is just a reverse Kylo Ren, who has blue powers, is a woman, has white hair, but is still tempted by dark power and ultimately makes the right choice for good. Does Kylo, a screaming man with a cape, have less, more or equal sex appeal compared to Elsa, a cgi wizard for children? I would say about equal, though no one would feel anything for a cgi Kylo Ren, that would be lame. Ugh, this took a weird turn. Have a lovely time. I hope this message finds you well.

Elsa becoming a villain doésn't fit with her character, also, the water spirit /did/ almost kill her.

When I saw the movie one thing that really threw me off was the decision not to destroy Arendelle. It would be so symbolic? And then they could do a musical rebuilding montage and sell play sets for new Arendelle and make money off of children as big corporate does

But Elsa has no personality so she can't possibly grow or bond with her sister xD

Took me forever to watch frozen 2

This movie had the most disappointing Chekhov’s gun I’ve seen in a LONG time with that bridge. Imagine someone pulling the gun off the wall, shooting a bullet, and then a horse girl travels MILES in seconds to block the bullet. I couldn’t believe they set it up so concretely only to dues ex machina via water horse

I think the movie was trying to do a take on white guilt. That you don't have to feel guilty for your ancestor's actions, but being complacent in the advantageous position they put you in is wrong. All the lore was just there as fluff. This is fine, but I'm not sure if Frozen 2 was the right movie for this message.

Frozen 2 tripped and fell so that Raya and the Last Dragon could run... and then trip on something else.

Your speculations sound like a much better movie

I am obsessed with Frozen 2 but it is HORRIBLE

Totally agree

I’m so glad someone addressed this so clearly because the lack of substance in the storyline really bothered me.

Yeah, I would like to watch your version.

Their reluctance to make Elsa evil also ruined the climax in Arendelle in KH3 I mean, Hans being the ice wolf?? What? It was clearly supposed to be Elsa Every time the team has the opportunity to be evil, Disney shoots it down because their super special main money horse girl Elsa can't be portrayed in a bad light, she brings in billions!

ngl i’m kinda sick of films tacking on ‘2’ at the end of a movie title and calling it a day. this movie doesn’t progress the previous plot. this movie barely feels connected with the first besides the characters being the same, but even then it feels like a lot of their personalities don’t match the first movie. tacking a ‘2’ at the end of it when it has little to nothing to do with the first movie just feels lazy imo. i feel like this movie could have been a bit better if they would have named it like, “Frozen: Into The Unknown” or something to do with the elements in the story, instead of marketing it as a direct sequel that progresses the plot of the previous movie

Was I the only one who noticed that the whole Anna canoe scene is just the Maelstrom reskin film tie in promotion? The boat literally being stopped and moved is in the ride.

im just mad this movie didn't have seasonal magic, it was right there.

Ok, I actually really liked frozen two but the way you PLANNED OUT AN ENTIRE MOVIE was so elegant and amazing and I would definitely watch it.

The dam could have been tied better to the curse. Like show some environmental degradation, or have the spirits be more obviously tainted by it like in Princess Mononoke.

oh, is frozen getting a marvel tie in?

Also, what was up with the dam? Grandpa: "Bwahaha, we will build them a dam that will allow them to cause a huge tidal wave in our lands! Ain't I brilliant!" Forest people: "Hey, this dam creates a huge pool of water, and for some arbitrary magical reason it weakens our lands which we did not realize would happen despite being one with nature and using its magic".

i have no passion for the frozen franchise but your concept got me genuinely hype. What a bummer they squandered the sequel.

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Disney put out a series documenting how they made frozen 2 and they fully did not have the story finished before starting to make the movie. Though I will give Disney credit because of their inclusion of indigenous representation and how dam production negatively affects indigenous populations.

I need a fanfiction now about elsa and this trusting villainess. Definitely sounds like a much more interesting story then the story we got in frozen 2.

Your version sounds so much better!! And it would have actually been a cool nod to the original concept for Frozen where Elsa was supposed to be a villain! Uhg, now I'm sad we'll never get to see that version : (

When I first watched the movie I felt confused.... as you mentioned, nothing made much sense. At first I thought I wasn't paying enough attention and rewatched it, but I still didn't get it. The spirits, aren't rightfully represented, honestly I thought the lizard was just a lizard but nooooooo it's the fire spirit. Then the wind??? It's just wind! The song Show Yourself, I thought was beautiful but it doesn't go with the story. To top it all off, THEY SEPERATED THEM! It makes no sense that Elsa leaves. It would've been better if they took longer to make the movie and actually gives us something worth the wait.

good music tho

i want that movie cant disney take back frozen 2

Im not saying anything but Anna and Aang have three of the same letters if we wanna take that route

I like your idea of there being more element girls. Disney missed out on some money selling more dolls XD

Okay, imagine for a second. Elsa finds the truth out and instead of going all icy she becomes corrupts from finding it out.

"But unfortunately, no skeletons." --Cult Leader Fluttershy

“I understand it’s been 6 years between the 2 movies...” *WHAT*

thank you!! i thought i was weird for not getting the hype behind this movie

The pain that we didn't get Anna as a wind spirit and there were 2 other cool magical girls to meet.

I would totally watch your version of Frozen 2 over the original.

I can’t wait for the day Disney wises up and hires this genius as head of their creative department

Controversial take: the first Frozen was also bad and felt like a bunch of random events smooshed together.

666k views rn, lol

Elsa: the last avitar

There's a great docu-series on Disney+ about the making of the movie and you're totally right about the story being changed AS the movie is recorded and animated

Yes. Give Ana a charmander.

ElSA & ANNA ARE The bridge connecting humans and spirits. ELSA is NOT the ice spirit

I hope they make your sequels and mark Frozen 2 as a draft (or not canon). Or somehow Disney's death grip on copyrights loosens to make this a reality separate from them.

The water spirit in Moana seems to be related to the wind spirit in Frozen bc they have the EXACT same personality. And isn't the Earth Goddess the Earth spirit. So are there multiple ones?

frozen broadway explained her powers and their family better

Okay I know this video is older and this is all just useless imagination but I can't stop thinking about this so- What if, in this alternate universe version of Frozen 3, we find out that Anna is the fifth spirit? But instead of being the avatar and controlling all the elements, her role is as a uniting force between all the spirits. Maybe her presence amplifies the other spirits' powers but she doesn't have any real powers of her own. Some sort of threat is introduced where they need all the spirits to work together to defeat it, so not only does Anna have to convince Elsa to trust her again, but she also has to get Villainess on her side too, via redemption arc. (Also the lizard maybe turns into a person so we can have more dolls)

I totally thought they were going to do the Avatar route with each element being a new Disney princess. And I can't understand why they didn't given the huge marketing potential.

I think your interpretation of the spirits in the beginning is a little wrong. I see the horse lizard etc. As manifestations of the spirit, but they are much greater than that. Just like Imthink that Attohallan is part of elsa's spirit, the glacier and elsa are just manifestations of the 5th spirit. Also, it was the spirits that attacked Arendelle, and they can get past the mist barrier because they created them, just like elsa could go through it.

Im studying cg at university so I went to frozen 2 with a couple of friends who are also stidying cg, and we were blown away by how technically amazing this movie was. We didn't really pay attention to the plot and all that mattered was who visually impressive it was.

I’ve decided this is how the real movie went. I simply do not remember Frozen 2

I thought Frozen 2 would be about a magic Fire princess like Elsa, and maybe she wants to go to war with Arendale, and well... Fire has a little advantage over ice... and the power of love and happiness melts the fire hussies upset heart..

Murder canoe and Anna's pokemon genuinely got a laugh out of me. I snorted every time the canoe was brought up omg lmao

High-five for the mention of alex Meck!

Elsa is secretly The next avatar

This story is far better than the actual movie...i hated that one

Unexpected Alex Mack reference.

Sooooo your frozen 2 version is 10 thousand times better than what we got😂😂

That movie sounds awesome

You know, at this point, I'll be more interesting in Frozen 3 where they find Tarzan is their brother and they go on adventure to find him in the jungle with Jane or whatever....

I’m rewatching this now

Man I am depressed by how much better Frozen 2 could be

Eight minutes in an all I’m hearing is this movie was Elsa attempting to speed run death 🤣😂

like for "murder canoe"

Frozen 2: Elsa gets tinnitus

Frozen Cinematic Universe would have been great

Based on the trailer and what I had heard the broad plot outline was about, I thought Disney was doing an actually interesting and original idea for a kid's movie. The first Frozen was as close to a populist Disney princess movie as one could probably get. The peasantry of Arendelle aren't ugly, backwards yokels who hate Elsa because she's different. They have a reasonable fear of her provably dangerous and mysterious power, which then gets exploited by other nobles to their own ends. The Duke of Weselton is arrogant, ignorant, and self-serving, but even his superstition is a genuinely held belief, and he expresses real sadness when Prince Hans (the real amoral villain, who is naturally of an even higher noble rank than the Duke) leads him to believe that Elsa killed Anna. On the flipside, Elsa's "Let It Go" moment of sequestering herself in an ice palace, while framed as a moment of personal liberation, is ultimately not the solution to the conflict. The film doesn't take the route of going "the masses are ignorant and bad, and you should just separate yourself from them." Nor does it punish or even really admonish the people of Arendelle for being wrong. The conflict gets resolved by acknowledging and allaying their fears, and putting to justice the people who were actively and knowingly stoking said fears. The irony is that the runaway success of the film Disney marketing necessarily sands off the edges of this message. Nobody is buying dolls of, or coloring books featuring, the humble blacksmiths and gongfarmers of Arendelle, because Elsa and Anna are the main characters, and by far the most marketable, with possibly only Olaf even coming close. And it's not exactly a controversial or revelatory observation to point out that Elsa is definitely the "bigger star" of the two, so to speak. There's a few reasons for it: she's got the "sympathetic misfit" thing going for her, she's the central pillar of most of the conflict in the story, and she got the big breakout musical number. But I think one of the bigger (and more cynical, to be honest) reasons is that she's the "cool" one (pun intended) because she has magic powers, and the closest thing Anna has to magic is basically an even more abstract and boring version of the "Heart" power from Captain Planet. I think that was always a present concern during the production of the first film, since they do everything they can, from having many of the posters framing the two sisters in equal prominence, to giving Anna her own character arc and sympathetic song, to drive home the idea that they are both equally important as one another. And it worked enough that nobody really shoves Anna aside and thinks "oh, she's a bad character, I don't like her", but it definitely didn't stop Elsa from becoming the "main character" through fan reception. So I figured the sequel was going to square these two things together, and continue the trend of the first movie's tone. The way I figured it was going to go was that Elsa, now no longer fearing her powers and how she's perceived by the outside world, gets too steeped into the magic, to the neglect of her duties to the normal people, and to the point of alienating Anna who, while her sister that she loves, is still just a "mundane" person. I was expecting this to be more of an "Anna" movie where the point is that, yes, while Elsa's magic is special and should be embraced instead of feared, it's not inherently "good" or something that puts her above other people. There's nothing wrong with being a "normal" person, because even "normal" people are special. Anna is "normal" and she was the emotional core of Elsa's story in the first film, and did as much, if not more, to resolve that conflict than she did. Kristoff was a "normal" icecutter who proved to be a kinder and more noble man than Prince Hans. But this movie basically did the opposite of that. Magic is the end-all, be-all of the world. Anyone who is skeptical of it or concerns about it are wrong, if not in a bad "grandpa did a genocide" way, but in a patronizing "oh, Anna, you sweet, stupid idiot, you should know better than to question Elsa's decisions. After all, she's an ice elemental princess and you're just a regular, dumbass human princess." It seems like they just went full-on into the marketing and decided to follow the money to what would get them the most of it. "New dresses and new hairstyles so we can sell more dolls! Give Elsa new powers so we can convince the brats the new movie is that much better! A cool, magical horse for them to also beg their parents to get! New magical critters to buy! New everything! Why would we consider telling kids that there might be downsides to magical wish fulfillment fantasies when we can make billions of dollars selling them one?!"

10:31 Personally I prefer them as a translucent green

Like in the first two mins of this video you summed up my thoughts on Frozen 2 perfectly. Why didn't they introduce other elemental 'witches' like Elsa. There was an opportunity for conflict here, for epic elemental battles. Frozen 2 was practically gift wrapped for Disney and they still messed it up.

Also I like your story better then the original frozen 2 story

So in Conclusion: Frozen 2 is just a MESS, NOT A GOOD MESS, OR A BAD MESS, JUST A MESS

Um- did you make a wig for the little porg? If so- thank you Jenny.

I just watched Frozen II for the first time, and I was left feeling confused.

Not sure if you have since watched the making of this film that Disney released, but they didn't even know what the singing Elsa heard would be until about 6 months from release. That's how un put together this film was.

I really don't understand all that love towards the first movie. Not only was it extremely bland and predictive, most of the plot was practically stolen from Barbie and Pegasus. The second one shows that it might not be so bad to actually embrace who you are and that drastic changes can be okay if you strive for them. Not to mention the message of "changes are not scary" is a much more supportive one.

I Need to know what happens in (hypothetical)frozen 3 now :(

So... where's the fanfiction?

YOUR VERSION WOULDA BEEN SO MUCH BETTER

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The movie's visuals were beautiful enough for me to just sort of shrug off the nonsensical plot.

The best thing that happened to Elsa after the first movie was the OUAT storyline.

Jenny, please contact Fanscription podcast so you can make a full version of this fanfic.

Only four years left till Jenny takes control of the Frozen Live Action airing on Disney plus 🤩

A nice touch was that Elsa instantly resurrected Olaf thanks to a homeopathist' theory about water.